This is in response to Chitrakar's blog !
here is the link to the write-a-song
The theme is the picture in her blog .
May i? the title is : picture a song :)
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(this is the start of the song and also the chorus )
it's not as if
i'm letting life get by
i pine for you
not knowing why
i'm reeling in my mind
i cannot seem to find
my anchor that is you !
(stanza I)
i walk thru the streets
i searched the seas
i toss in my sheets
searching my dreams
notknowing peace
if only i could -
find you !
(stanza 2 follows after the chorus )
this insanity
reaching to you
i've searched a few others
even liked a few
but my heart never lies
it always knew
my destiny is
but you !
(stanza 3 )
so simple a reason
as simple a hope
a million people
a kalideoscope
why do i hear that Cupid laugh
while i search without a pause
for you !
(background vocals with the music of chorus :)
what is life without you
are you a dream or true
what is life without you
where are you , wish i knew .
chorus .
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thank you Bij , needed that . mucho thankses Bij-gal :))))
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Hi this is really beautiful write with nice feel and flow..please post this song in my blog..if you like to join in helphig hand mission.
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Thats a real-- real great song. you can give many a song writer run for their money.
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Yashji , yeah , those words just burst thru , i guess you caught the flow of those words .
thank you Yashji :)
Sohini , if you scare me like this i will not write poetry . Arre baba re ........apun ganna kya likha , sohini pagal hui . mereko apun ki ben mangta , pagal pori nai mangta, vaat lag gayi re baap........
madhuri , hi and ty :)
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Wow!! You have capured the theme beautifully..loved this song..Loved these lines specially..
so simple a reason
as simple a hope
a million people
a kalideoscope
why do i hear that Cupid laugh
while i search without a pause
for you !
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hello...bhai abhi mein sach mein insanity ke daud se guzr jaungi aur finally u'l find me on your page as shahid sohini.... anna bhai ke gana ga ga ke bichari mar gayeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
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i walk thru the streets
i searched the seas
i toss in my sheets
I walk through these lonely streets
I search you in the waves that lashes fronm the dark seas
I am a knight in your sleepless dreams
I haunt you baby.....
come in my arms and hold me
baby!!!
This eternal love
This the song of recluse
I have sung in despair
come in my arms and hold me baby!!!
( redefined your song, no work actually at work ...so gana edit karu aur kya??? )
Bhai gussa mat hona
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Wow, a great poetry. Nice words, very touching.
Madhuri
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glad the emotions came thru ! no , not in any pain , just 'magined the story and wrooooote :) jus trying to be a performer , thru mah vurds
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anna9 - love the lyric; I've tried to imagine the song sung (within with the limited range of pop tunes I know) and still, I hear a lovely song touched with a little bit of pain...
the last line where are you, wish I knew is particularly strong
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